Good concept.. I hear flaws however.
First and formost the song is distorted. I suggest adding compressing it a little. The piano was rather nice to listen to however it is just way to simple. You need to add more instrumentation to this. Perhaps some strings, a tempani, heck lots of potential none the less. Keep on it.
Are you talking about the double hit on most of the notes? Thats not distortion i just thought it sounded better that way :| But if it is distorted tell me how then ill work on it and make this song better.