Piano improv can be so nice. Unlike most of the music on NG this song has the human characteristic of just a bit off tempo. Which is nice, you get more of a feel for the music. Throw in some higher notes next time to add to the ambient sound.
I kinda redid it, its now better and worse at the same time though so i released it as a separate tune. I went a bit overboard in the second one though, started inventing melodies.
this is pretty dang good for pretending, but i know what you mean lol. i really like the song idea though, it's incredible. emotional, dark, yet inspiring. makes me want to make something like this. i'm assuming that you know all the technical mistakes, so i'll try to give you some suggestions.
it feels like it needs more bass as you build up through 1:27. i think it might add to the climax
I think you should be using some more high right hand, especially when you get to the fast arppegiation at parts like 1:56.
You actually might want to keep some of the accidents that you made in there, but put them in time. it might add a dark twist to the song, if that's what you're going for
i give you credit for the idea. 9/10, 5/5 ;)
Thanks for the review! I will try implementing your tips, also the mistakes were mistakes, no genious there. (thats what happens when you never took any music classes and play only by ear( thats why i say that i pretend, because i dont want to take lessons as of right now, but i do like the instrument))