this one sounds ok, but doesnt have that "UMP" that your other stuff has, and you may want to rework it to give it that ump feel more beats more upbeat feel, It just needs abit more harder feel since that was the rout you seemed to be going about. just an idea there to think about, as this didnt seem as quality good as your other more pleasent ones, maybe thats the key maybe the rough sounding stuff is just not getting the rewards the other stuff brings out, anyways it was all good stuff i thought.
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This could be better but felt it was abit too rough, maybe tone it down just abit.
I think this was not as good because it seemed to be dramatically different than the previous two songs. I can tell that it is the same game, but the tone is just way different. It is more of a gritty, dirty feeling to it, which probably works for the harder levels. I guess I have been so used to hearing pleasant and soft music from you, this came off as different. It is a pretty good little loop and it seems to be suitable for the game. It's nice that so many interesting audio submissions came out of this.
this would make cool background music to some kind of helicopter or police action game.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.