Could be better
~~REVIEW~~
Now this was notbad had a very simple feel to it wich was ok, the backround effect that keeps on over and over seems abit too repititive if you ask me, and you probably want to add some more {VARIATY} of sounds and instraments, these are just a few tips that would make it sound somewhat better, this is actually a good piece just needs abit more over the edge while still keeping the same simpleness of it, anyways good luck this was a decent pice and i look forward to hearing more soon, anyways nice job.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Remove some of the backround effects, give the tune abit more edge, not so simple, Also could use alot more variaty to it,