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Simplistic Ftw

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Could be better

Now this was notbad had a very simple feel to it wich was ok, the backround effect that keeps on over and over seems abit too repititive if you ask me, and you probably want to add some more {VARIATY} of sounds and instraments, these are just a few tips that would make it sound somewhat better, this is actually a good piece just needs abit more over the edge while still keeping the same simpleness of it, anyways good luck this was a decent pice and i look forward to hearing more soon, anyways nice job.

Remove some of the backround effects, give the tune abit more edge, not so simple, Also could use alot more variaty to it,

Pretty Nice

A bit repetitive but pretty good all around. I thought it was catchy. Keep up the good work.

Mans0n responds:

thanks for the input! glad you like it

It's House....

Of course it's repetitive!
I would actually like it to be a little longer, because with the length it's at now there's not even enough time to grab yourself a ladyfriend to dance with! haha
It COULD use some more variation or filters with added length, but I don't think it's a big enough deal to warrant taking another point off.

Mans0n responds:

thanks for the review man!

Very simple, but repetitive

The song sounds pretty interesting, and it creates a nice "80s" atmosphere, but towards the end it gets too repetitive. The beats in this song just don't change too much, which gets a bit boring in the end.

I think you should try to put in some more effects and definetly some changes to the main beat, even if the song isn't so simplicistic anymore after you added more things to it.

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Mans0n responds:

its actually not very simple at all. this has ALOT of little beats variations going on. But you have to listen carefully. I agree that some parts MAY be a LITTLE to repetitive though..

A little repetitive

I think that while you've gone for simplistic here, I think that it may be the case that you've gone a little over the top with it here - the loops that you've made for the backing repeat too many times for me and there isn't enough variation for the piece, which seems to want it, which should show you the more ideal places to change bits and pieces of the track. Take the beat out for a few loops and just have the synths take over for a solo, which sounds different to what you've got at present. I know that it might over-complicate matters from your point of view, but bear with me.

Either that, or keep the beat at the standard and have the synths do a different tune for a few loops, act as a bridge and maybe lower the key of it. There are so many things you can do, so give it a shot.

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Mans0n responds:

Hmm what loops too many times? because there is variation EVERY 3 bars of the song... and I did as you suggested already. I the beat does stop and lets the synths play, but only for 1 bar. And the only think that is repetitive ( to me) is the LEad piano synth thing. but it doesn't matter because im going to re upload this pretty soon

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4.00 / 5.00

Feb 18, 2010
10:01 AM EST
File Info
5.8 MB
2 min 32 sec

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