Not a house song :p
I'd get rid of the vocals if I were u :P
& this song isn't exactly a House styled song either.. I'd go with Misc. or Ambient.
It REALLY helps to know where you put your songs.. people judge more harsh depending on the category, and if your song doesn't belong in the chosen category, it won't get too far when it comes to votes.
& I'd get rid of the high pitch sine @ 1:55. A bit hard on the ears
Overall, this song is somewhat enjoyable, so I say, keep it up, you have potential as an artist... ;]
Ok, thanks I will chage the category. I thought that the vocals are a good thing to add in the music! but perhaps it isn't.