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Took about 4 hours or so, idk i lost track of time.
plz vote fairly, and get at lest halfway thru before voting.

Edit: remade it.

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No Feeling....

I am totally mad!
I can hear that this is made in Fl 9 Demo, your song is on the top 10, i make my song better than this, my stuff is rated low, do you vote your stuff high everyday, jerk ?

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

Yeah, but NG has a fucked up system where you can gain voting power and vote for yourself and create a monopoly. It wasn't made in the demo either, but it was in FL 9. But well it's def not in the top ten nao..or even top 25000 XD
When I released this on NG it ended up being at 1.57 or something, so if i didn't vote it up, it'd never get heard again.
Getting 0 bombed sucks dude I know, but no hard feelings, good luck with your stuff and hope you get high scores.
Thanks for listening and reviewing.

Another track under the wrong genre.

The melodic lines have all the tenets of low quality trance. It's got a monotonous eruo-dance style beat that I don't like either. Definatly not techno.

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

meh, I can't put it in trance, or dance, I think techno's a pretty blanket term for ALL electronic music.

Thanks for the review.

sweet

this is really good keep up the good work

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

Thank you:3

Melody gets annoying

Sorry about the harsh score, but I really didn't like this piece. Some problems:

1. The mixing of the piano, I'd suggest to tweak the VST if you were using one, and assuming you're using FL Studio I'd say you'd use the "Dance Piano" preset and add reverb to the piano. Just a suggestion.

2. The melody got REALLY annoying, and it didn't help that it repeated through the WHOLE song. More variation would be nice. No, mapping the same melody to different instruments and adding a synth accompaniment that then evolves to an equally annoying melody doesn't count.

3. Slowdown part at around 2:40 sounded wrong, like the bare low keys sounded off, I'd assume you'd need to move some notes here and there. Also it could've been nice to let the main piano melody interact with that more heavily, like alternating between chords and the melody, and assuming you're using FL Studio I'd advise you to look at the sample project in "cool stuff" called "Hanging On (Remix)" the piano style there would really fit this song, if you took the time to rework it, that is. I also don't like how it immediately segued into the main melody again, a sweep sound effect would be nice. Or a crash.

Anyway all in all I didn't like this song, and if you're using something other than FL Studio try to apply my advice to whatever sequencer you're using. hope this helps, sorry if you got offended but hey, at least my review didn't go like: HAHA LOL DAT WAZ AWESOME

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

No offense taken, thanks for taking the time to tear it apart with a wall of text:3

(no sarcasm)

I really appreciate critiques like this.
It was the dance piano, i tried reverb and chorus on fl, but it didn't make a difference really.

thanks again^^

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Uploaded
Feb 17, 2010
3:20 AM EST
Genre
Techno
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4.2 MB
4 min 34 sec

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