dude sweet
damn thats a sweet tune, shoulda let me in on some of your new stuff earlier.
Author Comments
A kind of odd-softer song, lots of weird shit and some fun diddlies.
terrible vocals, ah whatever, these are more takes from the 3 AM sessions, haha.
Hey, I'm bored with your thrills and I can't wait for more
That's right I know how and why you have bruised your ego-maniac self
Uh huh, you fed yourself like a king,
and you spoke like a saint,
in truth a false god
crying alone
A humble breath
Escapes the lung
A breath unfathomed
And whispered to none
I got to ask ya
What it's like
Loudmouth rude and luxurious within
Have you found your harbor my friend?
Exposure betrays you and sways them to think
think of what is likely
the cold-blooded, the honest, the difficult,
and recurring truth
Kor-Rune responds:
Thanks bro! I'll try and find time to catch up with you sometime!
Pretty good.
As I already told you, this is pretty good. Odd, but good. Keep it up.
Aye not bad, not bad
I loved the tremolo guitar ('Bond theme' is pretty spot on), and the melodies are fantastic! I just thought the lyrics could have been revised a little though. You've got a great haunting Bellamy-esque voice, but the words kinda remind me of the sort of free-form stream of consciousness stuff I'd scribble down in school. There's some good material in there, but I reckon you could make it absolute poetry if you spent some time ironing out the kinks. It's going well man, can't wait to hear what else you've got!
Kor-Rune responds:
Thanks! You're dead right about the lyrics too. I just used them for brainstorming melodies and kept the brainstormed vocals. Silly me. I'll certainly spend some more time on them, thanks for the feedback, and glad you like the music!
Hmmm
Have a chick sing it and it be a Bond theme.
Kor-Rune responds:
haha, hey you're kinda right. It has that sort of bond/detective movie sort of feel.
haha woah
now thats some badass stuff, it totally sounds like the blues, and i love the guitar effects and how the lyrics are in a minor
5/5
Kor-Rune responds:
Thanks! That means a bunch! I figured I'd have fun with a few key play things and such. Glad you like!
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4.58 / 5.00
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- Feb 17, 2010
- 1:46 AM EST
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- 3 min 24 sec
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