This is a good start for a track! The ambient sounds make this very relaxing.^^
My suggestion for it is, you could add some strings, violins to the part with the piano, that would make it more epic and more emotional. Keep it up, jack!^^
I've just uploaded a track here on NG, too. Would be awesome if you could take a look at it. :P
Thanks, I looked at some of your stuff too, It's pretty cool.