This is really a nice track altogether!
My only criticism is that some tones sound a bit off sometimes, they start a little bit too late or too early. But you have a good sense for melodies, keep it up!^^
Would be great if you checked out the track I have uploaded just a few minutes ago. :P
thanks man! i kno, there r some offtones, garageband is hard to work with sometimes. next one will be better!