This song has a very nice melody, sounds emotional somehow and it entertains until the end. I'd just really love to hear a little reveerb or delay effect on it, that would make me give you a ten. ;]
I have just uploaded a track, too. Would be nice if you could take a look and give me your opinion.^^
This is quite the peaceful tune. It has an almost serene purity to the notes. As the title says, 'Forget Us', it seems like the tune is of moving on from something. Or even the remembrance of something lost, a quiet theme for the ones forgotten from childhood past, a idealic time of innocence lost, reflecting back on what was left behind. Maybe a childhood sweet heart, a good friend, that one dog you spent every summer day with.
You did a very good job. Congratulations.