There's really not much detail until like 2:45 into it. I'm sorry, this is a little flavorless.
But this is your first track. At least you have some of the elements needed to make quality songs, now all you need is variety and POOF! a song. Try again.
Thanks Man, Actually I'm Working on improving this track, 'cause it only has a Lead but no Synth or Construction Melody or something like that, and yes, hehe, it's not quite detailed, but thanks, you critic is really good.
P.D. Of course im going to improve it, n_n.