..but could need some EQ'ing, it does not sound as clear as it could with the sound effects. Additionally I'd make the drums a bit louder. But overall a good work, keep it up! Would be great if you checked out some of my stuff, too.^^
I've followed your "instructions", now it's really good. Actually, MUCH better!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.