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Good sounds

Very futuristic sounding with the synths making some sort of "helicopter sound" at the start, then slowing down as you bring in the second set. It was about here that I counsidered wanting some bass to really hear it properly.

I think that you've got a good beat to it, but the lack of bass is the real issue. Perhaps mess about with other instruments as well, but you're nearly there with the setup, so keep working at it.

I liked the flutes addition, because it sounded right, especially as it seemed that you increased the tempo subtly again.

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jxl180 responds:

Thank you for your review and insight. Much appreciated.


Hum...

That's a very nice song, i liked it, but it gets too repetitive in the middle of the music, but I'm not meaning that the music is a shit, it only repeats the same beat too much...
And the beat is very nice, the intro was cool, but when the drums started, i felt good... It's an awesome thing to listen when you have nothing to do...
I felt that sometimes you could slow a bit and other times you could get a little more fast, because of the repetition of the main beat in the mid of the music...

I hope the review helped you, man!! Good luck!!
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Roger Beck


jxl180 responds:

Thank you for taking the time to review my song. Everyone has suggested speeding up the tempo so I will certainly give it a shot. Thank you.


Could be a bit faster

The intro is quite nice with the kinda spacey background melodies. However, it developes a bit too slow for my liking. I think you should cut down on the intro a bit and let the main beat start sooner.

Speaking of the main beat, I think this could be a bit faster as well. I think the song would sound great with a faster beat.

Also, there isn't happening too much else in the song. Sure, you had some various parts which is always a good thing and kept the song from getting too repetitive. But some additional melodies, especialy in the second half of the song would make this song better, in my opinion.

Overall the song is nice as it is now, but there's still some room left for improvements.

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jxl180 responds:

Thank you for your review. I'll see what I can do.


Well

It starts out with an okay intro, and develops into a nice sounding beat, but there just isn't enough change in the beat over time. It would have sounded better with a faster beat, and at times it sounded like it was just looped with wah-wah effects thrown in.

That being said, it's a promising start. I think that if you added a bit more in terms of the beat, and made it faster, then it could be a good song, but as is, it's not that great. Better than a lot of what gets crapped in the audio portal, but nothing special either. Keep up the work though man, you show promise.

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jxl180 responds:

Thank you for the honest review.

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jxl180
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Listens
701
Downloads
47
Votes
8
Score
3.81 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 13, 2010
5:35 PM EST
Genre
House
File Info
Song
3.4 MB
3 min 44 sec

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