Its not that bad. to be honest. It's a little slow to be called a DnB song. Make it louder, more bass, make it longer, make it faster. Keep playing around with it and it should turn out fine. Once it hits about 45 seconds, that needs to be heavier and more punchy. Other than that, I like where you are going with it. But hey, no more making music for pictures. Unless you want to share with the rest of us :P
Lemme know when your done.
will dl when your done
Sorry man, i never got back to you.... Man i made this a long time ago xD
fist of all, I needs some better percussion. I think maybe ambient(there i go again) samples would fit better, with a different beat. and it need mixing. and mastering if possible.
But great concept, just needs better execution.
I have been looking at my old stuff recently, i may redo this track...
Thanks for the review! I agree the execution was horrid.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.