Great start, but...
You've got good sound quality for starters. But the song lacked flow. The beats never quite got in sync with each other, and the bassline was off-key from the melody line. Whether that was intentional or not, I can't tell. But it's a great start, and I'll check back for updates
Hey thnx ! Finaly a bit of a normal Comment ! Yes its Intationally .. its soppose to have this flow in it ! Im Trying to make my own style here, wich pfew preople try to understand.
But thanx for comment ! ;-)