I played somthing like that when i was.. 5.
If you're trying to go for minimilist modern, you're in the right direction. Otherwise there was nothing to it at all, and it definatly wasnt classical. The pan was REALLY annoying, and i'd advise against using it ever when you only have one instrument.
Consider what a track needs to be a piece of music: A chord pattern, starting on the I'st, ending on the V'th, A backing, a distinct melody and a point where at least one of those parts changes to give a new section of music.
well I am greatful that you replyed to my music, and as for how simple it is, that could be mostly due to the fact that i have never taken a music lesson in my life.
It's far too simple. It's like somthing I'd hear in a beginner's piano class during warmups.