sigh nice siiiigh (order of what I said to myself)
first off at :38 your playing get a little laggy. I love the malody at :51. good transitions. at 1:25 it sounded just like you were trying too hard to find something to fit into that spot, and tomeit didn't pay off. next did not like the drums in this especially at the end were you could really hear them. and lastly the voices... The voices at the beginning gave absolutly nothing to this piece. I expected it to get all like you dark king song but it stayed almost the same, and the voices at the end I just didn't like.