pretty awesome man!
the delay works nicely. As said below i think you should make it longer(-1). Be patient with ur projects...It'll pay off. Also i believe a note or two clash together(-1)... still... i enjoyed it. Please check out my stuff and tell me when your finished
This, like 90% of everything I made in high school, was made in the middle of class. So I had an hour and a half max for each song. That's why I seem so impatient with my music: I'm always racing against the bell in a surprisingly non-metaphorical way.
As for this song in particular, I probably won't end up adding anything else to it, hence it's posted right now. Thanks for listening and reviewing though. :D
I'm a tough judge though. Longer. This is a WIP. You can use this to go somewhere. Add to it, expand on it, and I think you may have something. This doesn't loop very well, so make it a song!
7 seems like a high score for a tough judge...but I'll take it. ;)
This song entered a point where I couldn't think of anything to add to it without a decline in quality.
It's a valid point, though.