not bad

sounds pretty good for a first try. Could make a good loop, but it stops and goes silent for the last couple seconds.

Sounds decent enough to work with..

was looking for something like this to play with in FL8. will get back to you when I do..

HEY

this is just what I need!

(can i use it in ma game)

Erm...

Not very creative, short, and it doesn't even "loop".
I suggest putting in more effort and making a real song or researching on how to make a proper working LOOPING loop. :D
Keep trying. You'll get there...