I really like this!
Excellent song, great lyrics, really nice sounding melody. I was going to say something about the mix but it sounds like you just recorded this with a single mic, and it is what it is so I won't knock it for that, i'll merely rate this on the song its self, which is really good. There is some timing issues in your guitar playing but it's not a deal breaker. You also have a great singing voice, it's a shame the mic you're using doesn't do it much justice. The delivery was very heartfelt.
I might be interested in maybe doing a more elaborate (more instruments) cover of this song, if that's OK with you? If it is, could you PM the chords/lyrics?
Great work :).