I think this is something that can definitely be improved on, but is also something that I can stand :D
So to start off, nice choice of a pluck ( bit stylez right? :D ) but I think it fits, and the bass is nice too :)
My problem with this (and yeah, we all try and do this but it never works out) is to mix a 4/4 with 6/8 triplets - in the hi-hat try just making it upbeats and I think you'll have a pretty good song :D
And make it longer, of course but as you said it's just a loop you're working on, so no points off for that.
Also - try not to use Fl presets (if you keep using them everybody will know you use fl :D)
But really good work overall!
Keep it up! :)
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