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I like some of the new harmonies you introduced to the piece in the beginning. I'm not a fan of the percussion chunks that came with the files that you used. It works a lot better when your doing DnB or IDM. 1:53 and on kinda ruined my interest because its very dry ( needs a bassline). I feel like you used too much of his previous structure of the song. Those perc stabs really don't mix well with this genre haha. Anyways I'm not trying to sound like a jerk. I enjoy many of the timbres and some of the extra harmony at the beginning. Anyways...
- LD -