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Feb 9, 2010 | 2:06 PM EST
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3.3 MB
2 min 55 sec
4.29 / 5.00

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Rated 4.29 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

Just a start. Would love as many comments and criticism as Possible to help make this the best I can.
Would also love any Ideas for improvement. :D
I know the singing isn't that good but oh well. lolz
I am gonna re-record it later


Verse 1:
Your Heart is fine, when your hands in mine.
It feels like exstacy, when you are sitting next to me.
I lay in bed, with thoughts of you running through my head.
I know that u sit and think about me too.

If you were a needle, I'd be your thread.
If you were tired, I'd be your bed.
If you were hungry, I'd be the bread. To make sure that you get fed.
If you were fat, I'd be your trainer.
If you were noodles, I'd be your strainer.

I know you will always be, sitting there with a smile just waiting for me.
I am so thankful I met you, My life was one but now it equals two.
I will always be there, even if it fells that no one cares at all.
I will be the one to catch you if you start to fall.
I will celebrate, when you are having a ball.
When you feel low, I'll be there to make sure you stand tall.




Rated 5 / 5 stars

Simply Beautiful

Just clean it up a bit and make a reversion, at some some parts you get a bit off key, but beautiful man, i bet ur girly loved it ;)

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Branches responds:

thx man. yea I gotta wait for my computer to get back up it crashed so no recording. :C