Nice song, I must say. Although it doesn't feels Touhou-ish, it is okay.
Just a thing I noted: This is a Loop, not a Song. Mind changing that?
Composition is quite good but tracks could definitely do with some frequency equalizing. It sounds too busy at parts. Strings are overriding the piano too much, one piano track overrides the other too much. There's more to mastering than simply adjusting the volume of each track.
better that #4
It sounds very much like a real Touhou song. It sounds like a melody ZUN would use, but you don't have the right samples of each instrument. You have the instruments all correct, just have the wrong types of strings and piano. Also, I feel like the bass may be a bit to high. Over all though, this was a very solid attempt. Good job.
The string instruments, huh? I should use a better one indeed.
Hmm... I like it.
Better than number 4 in fact. You nailed the Touhou feel much better in here.
I also loved how easily it loops back. Pretty good.
Haven't heard the original but I know a few Touhou songs. By the sounds of this I'd say you have the melody solid and added your own feel to it. Anyways its nice.
Actually, this is not a remix of any Touhou Song. It's kinda like "my own style of Touhou Music", and that's why I called it a Touhou Attempt. :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.