Hey it's catchy
This is pretty good for a start
I know what you mean, tired and want to finish something.. always best to leave it for the other day but hard to do it.. I always quickly finish it and upload it, but then the endings aren't great. This needs something more, some finishing, like a nice melody as Cheezer mentioned. But yeah, a good start, finish it and upload the whole thing ;)
Great start. I love the beat. What I would do is make a chord progression and bust out a melody. All you have is a bass part and a sick beat. The bass part is boring btw.