a solid start.
you need to add more percs and drums and anything you can to thicken the track up. Work on the eq and change the wideness on your kick and any heavy perc or clap you use throughout the track. the buildup REALLY needs work , its very weak atm , just a clap lol.
but If you work on this , it can turn into something really good.
keep working on it.
return the favor sometime
thanks for the review
as i said ive only just started making it so it just a basic idea atm
will keep working on it though