the melodies are ok , but pump the brakes for asec
The overall track sound is WAY over compressed and way to loud. its overkill and will hurt anyone's ears. you gotta mix this down a little better. Just re eq these sounds individually and work on a different method of compression perhaps?
right now its just overkill
6/10 for having a decent track rough draft , work on the compression
5 for effort
return the favor sometime :]
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