Not bad, chord progression is above average.
Sounds like your kind of new to fruity loops. When I say that , I dont mean any disrespect , I'm just pointing out that the vst's and what not sound like basic stock FL. If you switched some of these instruments to more powerful ones and used some automation this track could be improved big time.
Well keep trying new tricks and try to learn as much as you can.
return the favor when you get a chance!