What a loss.
It was a great song, don't get me wrong. However, your recording quality...
Find a way to get the recording quality better. Then you will have a better chance at getting your music recognized. Before that, though, the shortcomings of the recording equipment fuzzy up the song's quality to the point that it would be hard to listen to often.
You seem to know what you are doing, though. Nice delivery on the melody, and the bass wasn't too bad. On a side note, the bass did seem to repeat itself just a bit, or possibly was a bit too prominent; unfortunately, I do not know enough about musicality to tell you anything except that the bass wasn't perfect. Of course, this could also just be a recording problem, so you should fix the recording quality before heeding my advice.