Very nice work! I really enjoy the funky, modernistic Mario tune in this song, sort of a good new twist to the song. This would work nicely in a platformer menu screen or level. The drums really have a good, funky beat. All of the sounds blend together and work well. The tune could use a bit more depth, and it could also be a bit longer. The loop timing was a bit off, but that isn't really a big problem. Very good loop!
Sounds like a really wacky platforming level. DnB beat doesn't really fit that well, but it adds to the wackiness in a way.
Very nicely done, I could tell it had a Mario sort of theme to it and it was very nicely executed. The first video game loop on Newgrounds and I certaintly liked it! Although the techno beat could sound a little sloppy after just seconds of listening to it and it didn't really go along with the audio all that well. It could definitely use a little more depth or something rather than the sloppy techno beat but it's still very enjoyable, nice work Recoil!
very mario like
A fun theme you have here this was pretty interesting and i found this to be unique and some good quality about it sofor that good job. Alright so this had a very mario like feel and theme, so i like where you went with this, i feel it could have been longer and more themed out with mario sounds and such, what you have here is pretty impressive though, its a good little loop and such, so nice job indeed, some extra details could be added with a longer tune. And so you have it a good piece of tune here from the portal with a nice sound, it could have some extras but thats for later
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There are some possibilities that could make this, i may suggest a few possible ideas that could help and improve on an already fine piece. Im ok with loops and all, but seems like you could really do something with this one and not just for a loop, with abit more effort and some extra sounds here and there this could actually be a decent tune rather a loop.
First video game song on Newgrounds you say?
Well I'd say that's a milestone that's for sure. So approximetly 3 years later it still sounds listenable at the least. Nothing fancy but still a milestone is a milestone;. Congrats on that man
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.