hot
just hot.
Hey, whats up.
Verse - 1 (Mr. Jangles)
Draw your gun son, before the duel is done.
you already know that it can't be won.
cuz i'd just hit you in the face with tha butt of my gun,
but
listen up son its all just for fun, and you
already know dat your'd ass better run.
cuz dez words right here, they weigh a tun, and in the end there can only be one.
So get ready motha fucka and draw that gun.
Chorus - 2 (Broken Needle)
I got the crow bar cmon lets get em
Take they thoughts n rape em
No memory means we aint playin safe n
makin witch doctors loose patients
Ma rap style is like half Hatian
Sentence structure like u facin
More than federal incarcaration
So if I lost ya, fuck ya radio station
Verse - 2 (Broken Needle)
Ayo Dr Jangles
come here check the corpse
Looks like the same killers
got in here by force
Clear signs of a break in
Take the mental stage n
and this time around...
they greased up the bacon
the rest is sunny side up
I kno who real killers are
yes, my minds made up
These old souls found P I R
n police lookin like psyduck
u kno killers and crime scenes
Chorus - 2 (Broken Needle)
I got the crow bar cmon lets get em
Take they thoughts n rape em
No memory means we aint playin safe n
makin witch doctors loose patients
Ma rap style is like half Hatian
Sentence structure like u facin
More than federal incarcaration
So if I lost ya, fuck ya radio station
Ending - (samples from Cannibal OX - Iron Galaxy)
Me and Broken Needle doin our thing together and me rapping for the first time.
Thanks for listening and feel free to vote, review, fav, you know! :-)
Peace.
hot
just hot.
Nice!
Really pro, and not bad for your first rap BJ. Solid track, keep it up you guys.
thanks dude, yea thats my very first time rappin before, thats why its only 1 verse.
i was wanting to also add more to this one maybe, like a scratching after.
if you have any idead or pointers for my voice, style, or words, let me kno on AIM.
peace.
Whoa
I like the underground feel of this one. Nice work for the first time rapping. The chorus is sick. BN's verse is great, he really stepped up. I love the"n police lookin like psyduck" line, drop that Pokedex knowledge! Great work
5.00 / 5.00 (unchanged)
team unstoppable right here, you already know=D was awesome working with you sir. More to come soon=D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.