The whole thing was really well composed, the only thing that'd I'd change was that a low string synth was only in the left channel, and that res-clippy synth. It was way too loud. Other than that, this was a wonderful track. I liked the drums. Alot of automation going on I supposed. I think you took my advice and raised the low-end. Did alot of good, huh?
I'm looking forward to seeing more, you are one of the most talented people on the Audio Portal.
Turns out that sometimes my knobs turn themselves out of nowhere. <_< >_> And my saved presets I got sometimes are tilted to one channel. So I gotta watch out for those. I'll prolly end up centering them and then overwriting them. And the 303 was loud... The balance on my speakers were off so it was centered when I listened until I saw my knob down there is off too! Damn knobs.
And I kinda did take your advice and didn't. What I did was actually use some mastering stuff and it made everything peachy-keen. As for me being one of the most talented... I'm not too sure on that one. There's lots of people with potential out there. Some have more than others but most of us are just making music to kill time while we're in highschool, right? At least, I am.