i love how everything seems to go together. tho the melody being off beat did kinda ruin its still good. other then the melody, everything sounds stock, like nothing was mixed.
Not a bad start . . .
It needs a bit of work though. The melodies were a bit off beat, you should probably get them a little bit nicer sounding before using them. Also, it was a bit incomplete sounding, I don't think there was much of a bass there.
Other than that, I did enjoy listening to the melody, and I thought you did a nice job with making melodies that sounded good together. Keep working on it and I'm sure it'll turn out nicely.
Ok thank you, Samus aran lover :p
I'm gonna try to improve my skills with FL studio and my synchronization with the beat... But the programm is uneasy to master :/