I like it!
I suggest you make a short pause, and then let the melody "fall" away, maybe by adding a choir, and maybe putting the melody together to a more solid flow, and also maybe switching instrument. Hmm, it's difficult to describe since I'm not familiar with all those music terms. I'm just trying to describe what my ears expect to hear next, if you get what I mean :P
I hope you manage to derive some useful information from what I wrote. Great song! Keep it up