Solid start.

Would recommend some different vst's or perhaps different ways to make new presets. the track to me sounds like a rough draft, the layout is all there. Some of the transitions are working out but will need more work. Alot of these sounds need to be replaced , but the melodies and piano roll'ed notes are fine the way they are. It needs to be mixed down , there is barely any mixdown at all. Filter in some of these square leads , it will sound much better , use some panning and thickening on the percs , hats , etc

Just stuff like that to maybe work on :]
7/10 keep working on it