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Feb 5, 2010 | 7:17 PM EST
File Info
1.5 MB
1 min 6 sec
2.50 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 2.50 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
379 Plays | 35 Downloads
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Electronic - Video Game

Author Comments

Hello! This is OSXGuru007 here! This my first submission, so rate high and comment! :)



Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Dude, this needs some serious work....

Not to bash you or anything, but you shouldn't have uploaded this song in it's current state. There are multiple problems with it: 1. It's too short 2. The bass is extremely choppy and doesn't have defined lengths 3. The melody just keeps repeating and repeating 4. There's no counter-melody 5. It sounds just plain unmastered

However, you did do a few things right: 1. The melody IS a good one 2. The feel of an 8-bit song is there 3. The sounds seem...well, sound

Listen, I can understand that you are new here, so let me help you out a bit. Whenever you create a song, you need to let a few of your friends here it, and have them give you some hard criticism, so you can learn what you did right and wrong. If you can, you need to use a good pair of speakers or headphones and remaster the song when completed to make sure there are no parts of the song that make your ears cringe (there were a few in this one). If you do those two simple things you'll be able to crank out some better tunes on this site.

All in all, I hope you took this review as constructive criticism, and keep trying to find your place on this site of Newgrounds! Keep it up man!

---The Fair Reviewer---

OSXGuru007 responds:

Thanks dude, it was just going to be a quick loop for a game though. This WAS my first submission. I made some others too.