I would give you a 10
if I took into consideration you're epic new language due to your "c" key being broken. Epic.
But as for the song, obviously lots of default FLS stuff. But, thats what they're there for. *I* dont care for them, but you see thats the difference between me and BlackHoles if you get the drift Hah.
But yeah, variation is needed for sure, and mixing attention is needed. But TRUST me Ive heard WAY worse if this is seriously your first song. If it trult is the first song Im impressed.
8.5/10 (9.10) for variation and mixing attention. Cool though.
5/5 = impressed on your starting point.