has a really dark, grunge feel to it, and the form is perfect. your voice kind of reminds me of foo fighter's old stuff.
the song it's self could use some more vocals, and maybe some more complex bass riffs, between chords. Right now it's perfect for building on, like you said, so please do!!
it also felt like it was missing a lead guitar. that would help the song out a lot, i think.
just one technical issue: 0:53, the bass didn't hit the goal note right away on the slide :p
i can't think of anything else you could do, great job! btw, i make music as well, if you wouldn't mind reviewing a song or two of mine, that would be great! i'm into mutual reviews. thanks!
Thanks man! I had been listening to alot of Soundgarden when I wrote this lol. I never got a chance to add Lead, this is more of a demo then anything. I wrote the lyrics on spot and didn't have alot of time, but expect more! :D