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Truth In Lies

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please rate and comment, i know the vocals are very rough, thats cause this was just an example for my band, our actual singer is much better. The music and lyrics are by ME though.
So basicially im asking for comments on my lyrics and music. thanks. All i ask is for a fair rating.

Lyrics
Verse 1
Run and hide, you spineless dick
You always were the one to ditch
But I'm okay cause i know
That i dont need you

Pre Chorus
Cause your words are like a poison
Your tongue is selling lies
A sickening attempt at tyranny

Chorus
Get it through your head, I think your crazy
Everythings been said, you fucking played me
You should just drop dead, your such a shitty friend

Verse 2
Now I see, whats inside you
It's the farthest thing from true
Your a two-face and a liar
A masquorater

Pre Chorus
Cause your words are like a poison
Your tongue is selling lies
A sickening attempt at tyranny

Chorus
Get it through your head, I think your crazy
Everythings been said, you fucking played me
You should just drop dead, your such a shitty friend

Get it through your head, I think your crazy
Everythings been said, you fucking played me
You should just drop dead, your such a shitty friend

Bridge
Your a serpent under stones
You slither out of site
You try to bite me and infect me
With your poison

Your always telling lies
As you look me in the eyes
It's been so long since i though tyou had a concience

Chorus
Get it through your head, I think your crazy
Everythings been said, you fucking played me
You should just drop dead, your such a shitty friend

Get it through your head, I think your crazy
Everythings been said, you fucking played me
You should just drop dead, your such a shitty friend

Get it through your head, I think your crazy
Everythings been said, you fucking played me
You should just drop dead, your such a shitty friend

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I get the picture.

I think you've explained yourself enough on the vocals so I won't critique that, but I think the overall song itself was done just fine. Dynamics are always good. Can't wait to hear it with your singer.

Drunk or Dumb?

Sorry to put it so bold but if you can't sing well... don't.
It's okay if you wish to sing, but get a few lesson before putting your singing talents on internet.

The song is however pretty good. The lyrics and instruments I mean, made me rock in my chair for a moment.

I do hope you get some singing lessons because you're voice could become a damn lot better from it.

zac11114 responds:

lol yes, it is fine to be bold, i know my singing is terrible, and i wasnt actually going to put this on the internet, but i decided to last minute, theres a version on here without the vocals.

Thanks, i took alot of time on the lyrics and instruments.

And yes, i dont know i could. but this was just meant to be kind of an example so our singer would be able to know when to start and stop, the cues ect. But yes, it could be much better i know lol. No offence was taken at you speaking the truth on my very very very poor singing xD

>.< yarr

the music is awesome, and the lycis was great. your singing made me laugh. i can't sing, so i shouldn't be talking, but still. Get your singer to sing this and i'm sure it would be awesomesauce. lmao

zac11114 responds:

lol yes, well i wasn't exactly trying to be a bold singer and no, i am a horrible singer lol. No offence taken, there is a reason i dont do it. i just used it to give an idea on where our singer starts and such. But yes, thans for the comments on the music and lyrics. But yes, i am very excited for our singer to do it so we get a version that doesnt make anyones ears bleed xD

Credits & Info

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Faves:
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Downloads
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Score
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Uploaded
Feb 5, 2010
3:01 PM EST
Genre
Pop
File Info
Song
2.5 MB
2 min 42 sec

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