As the people said..
Hi dude, as the people already said, the melody doesn't fit with vocals at all, the bass is the same in the entire work..
However the second part is better. The sound is cool, well i use fruity loops too and i know it's limits. I think sounds are good and also the compression..
But please try to be more original ;) (And trash every sample included with FL).
What he said...
Again, unoriginal and lacking a purpose.
Gome on Montana! Step up your game!
I'm sorry, but nothing in this song worked. The vocals from one of the Cool Stuff songs just did NOT fit into this song. The melody didn't go along with the vocals at ALL. Also, the stolen melody from "Maybe" makes you lose points too.
I expect better out of you.