Overall an exellent beat. Pretty sweet lyrics too.
The flow in the beginning is not that good.
Later it gets much better. When you get into it.
When recording make sure the mic stays in the same range to your mouth all the time.
There is a trick to get into a flow before it really starts and that is:
Rap from the beginning but cut what you don't need later.
In that way you are allready in a flow when you get the part where you have the start.