melodies are a bit

to simple for me not very surprising in the beginning that puts me off still overall pretty decent.
Some synths at around 5 minutes are so loud that the drown the beat.
and a good techno trance or dance is about the beat or the absence of beat if you are in a break and build to the beat.

Do not considerthis to be your theme because you will improve and the theme you have now will not be your theme in let's say a year from now!
It's betterto have your audience decide what your signature piece is :)
believ me audiences will perceive you differently than you do yourself :)
Keep on going!

Unmemorable

This song isnt all that melody, and the drums dont stand out at all, you could keep them at the same volume if they were more punchy.

I like the breakdown at 1:20.
The arpish melody you have going at about 2:45 is okay at first, but it just stopped going with the rest of the song throwing it off.
The melody at 3:30 is pretty good.
At 4:00 the plucks just seem random, dont get me wrong, it didnt sound out of tune, but there still wasnt any melody-like correspondance.
The gate at 5:30 is kinda spazy, which is actually good for that part, it just should have had more variation.

Overall this song was okay, the reason its just okay is because the song jumped around so much, I know that was your intention, but it makes the song unmemorable because you cant get 7 different beats stuck in your head, and for that matter not even one because there wasnt a whole lot of progression or catchy melodies.

5/10 - 3/5 - Keep working

Very nice

Wide variety of sound in here, and it's also a long song. Very nice work :D