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Hey NGs community! I was just wondering if you could uhh.. give me some motivation and direction concerning this track. XD

After working on it a bit today, I couldn't help but upload this one to NGs. You guys are pretty helpful so i'd love it if you could tell me your thoughts on the tune! I could definitely use some direction on this one. I want to give it a unique feel in the dance genre.. well at least make it into a catchy tune. Thoughts over it are genuinely wanted and appreciated! :)

I hope you enjoy this little clip.. (I know, i'm such a damn tease with all of my clips on here.. Sorry! :/ )

Thanks guys!
-- Chris

EDIT: Sorry about the volume being a tad low.. It's not totally mastered yet!


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You're a genious!

After listening at free falling through clouds 1kk times, I decieded to click on your profile, all i found are just masterpieces, good job dude!

i am almost speachless!

this song had a brilliant beginning!
it transitioned from one part of
the song to the next really
fluently as well! the song
built itself up, and came
to the best and main
part of itself and
then stopped.
you really
need to
make it
very good song
all im gonna say

ioneofmany responds:

I plan on finishing this one once I have time dude!
I swear it! Thanks for the input though!! :D
I really love hearing it from Newgrounds.
Feel free to review more of my stuff!
Lol I like the way you make reviews.
It's very interesting and brightened
my day significantly. In fact, I want
you to review more of my stuff
so that I get to experience
some more randomness
such as this format
of writing!

-- Chris

great start man!

I also love the vocal parts. I you think you should add song softer more ambient like parts like free falling through the clouds, MY FAV!!!

ioneofmany responds:

Hmm... Thanks for the input dude! :D

Very cool

I love the vocals. The melody and your dance lead are pretty good as well. But, while I'm writing this review (and very much enjoying your song), it decided to end at 1:06. Thoroughly annoying =.=. Something so awesome should be finished =). I'll dl it if you do.

I say, build up what you have at the end of the song and add one or two more upper register sounds and some mid/lower sounds as well for complexity, then transition into a softer phase, perhaps with just padding. After that, bring back that blow bottle sound you had in the intro, but mix it with the dance lead you have for the second half, add a few bass bombs, and you're golden.

ioneofmany responds:

Hey thanks Bob! Sorry that its so short and it bothers you. :X Great suggestions that I'll take into consideration. This goes for everyone else as well. This semester is winding down and I hopefully will have some free time coming up soon. I read all of my reviews so it means a lot to me.

-- Chris


This was submitted 2 months ago, and yet I'm scratching my head, wondering why this isn't finished.

If you're having troubles trying to decide where to go starting from the end of this track, I have a few suggestions.

-Try breaking up the melody so that only every other note plays to give it a more distorted sound.
-Try giving a bassier counter-melody.
-Try adding another high synth harmony/melody.
-Try letting the music speak and do whatever feels natural.

You don't have to use my suggestions, I just want this song to be done ASAP! This could easily reach Top 5 if completed. I know I would 5 it instantly, at least.

Amazing work, I don't come across tracks this good very often.

ioneofmany responds:

Sorry i'm like to respond to your suggestions, but thanks! They're very much appreciated :)

Credits & Info


4.64 / 5.00

Feb 3, 2010
8:39 PM EST
File Info
2.5 MB
1 min 6 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.