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Skyline [BxR]

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Ok so here's my third cut of this song. I wanted to make it original and flowing, so I recorded every piano part me playing so it didnt end up too synth-e. So I really wanna know what you guys think so I can put the finishing touches on this and get it submitted!

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Another Critique!

The song seems confused. It's trying to be both exciting (techno), and peaceful (piano). Stick to one and you'll be fine.

I vote go for peaceful. It's not usual that we see a successful peaceful piano part in NAP. To do this, I'd suggest:
Keystrokes at 0:36 needs to be toned down. Drums at 0:41 are neither useful or useless. Choose to either incorporate it into the end of the song (tying it back to the beginning) or cut it entirely. You need to tone down the techno at 1:21 (either decrease the volume dramatically, or cut it out entirely - I'd do the latter). It detracts from the piano.

Overall: Piano wants to be the centerpiece. If you want it to be excitng, use the piano as an accent instead of the center melody. If you want it to be peaceful, tone down the techno side of it.
8 Stars; 4/5.


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Mod the techno

Absolutely love the piano parts. But I feel that the techno things kill it...
Other than that, great song!!


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Credits & Info

jk182
Author

Listens
586
Downloads
49
Votes
32
Score
4.16 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 3, 2010
7:01 PM EST
Genre
Ambient
File Info
Song
6 MB
2 min 37 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.