Personally I don't like reviewing WIP's...

Let's see... It lost my attention, badly, like I almost fell asleep.

It's a very basic template. Like very very basic. Kick/Hat/Clap/Bass/Chord Block/Lead. Try adding some stuff that would make me say "hey that's bad ass", like automation clips perhaps.

I'm emailing you the song I was planning on finishing for you. Do you hear how after the vocals a synth sweeps in to almost "replace" the voice? and then I added some glitch effects and filtering to the voice? I also am in love with distortion, so i'm sure you could hear a lot of that.

The instruments you use tend to be mundane, and very Korg R3 Keyboardy. I don't even use a keyboard in my stuff xD

Maybe after you add your distortion and leads, it'll sound better, but I would

A) change the beat up
B) Change the chord structure up
C) Pick different instruments, or edit them
D) Be sure to choose a very "bossy" lead. Something that's in your face D:<!!!!

Oh and of course syncing needs to be fixed, but since you used a keyboard i could understand.

%u266A Aeris %u266A

Sweet :)

Yeah haha you definitely need to work on timing issues :)
But like the guy below me said, definitely add some chords in there..
Also, if you're gonna make a song as long as this one is, variation is key, also intriguing melodies/ awesome stuffs :D haha
Otherwise, really good song!!

_/ShootingStar\_

All Caught Up {WIP v1} / KittehTron's Perrspective

Please do upload a quantized verrsion, and I'd rrecommend cutting the trracks lengh in half because therre isn't enough progrression to hold the interrest of the listenner.
Try to add a sub-bass spice things up. I hearr a whining saw in the backgrround that should be rreplaced with a simple chorrd prrogrression. I do like you drrums : )!!

Style:5/10
Orrginality:4/10
Varriety/Hook:2/10
Note: I see tons of potential, send us yourr best!
Final Scorres: 4/10
Rrating: 2/5