This is pretty legit. I think it'd sound cool if later on in the song you bring in some heavier kicks with a bit more bass and slowed down (or lengthen out) the melody for a little while. A more acid version of that main synth would probably sound cool with it. But, it's just an idea. The song already sounds beast as it is. Just keep on doing what you're doing.
Lol just found this review, thanks I might actually do that when I ever get around to finishing this song, I've tried redoing it a few times but its sounding off, Im just waiting for the right moment to restart it
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