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this song is my turning point vocally tell me what you think?

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Great, some issues.

First, let me say your falsetto is great. It was the most impressive part of the song in my opinion, and has some great potential. The song writing is alright, but I think the drums cut out a bit early in the end. I suggest keeping the drums going a bit longer, maybe an outro with the guitars and drums on their own. Another point I believe needs work is the guitar tone (both acoustic and electric) How are you recording them? I suggest that for the acoustic you take the treble and mids down a bit (especially the treble) and add a bit more bass to round out the tone, make it a bit fuller sounding. For the electric I suggest a similar mod to the tone. For what you're doing here, I think a good starting point eq wise is this (on a scale of one to ten); Bass:7 Mid:7 Treble:4.5. This should smooth out the tone and make it fit the emotional value of the song better. I also suggest that you rock it on the neck pickup, as this will also round out the tone. Tons of potential here, and with some tinkering on the instruments tone and the ending arrangement you have a solid song.

Hope I helped, keep cranking out the tunes!

tootsie10 responds:

thanks yeah i have lots of troble commpressing vocals , but ill try mixing how you said! thanks again :)


The vocals have a lot of potential here; I think you're actually holding yourself back with the mix on the guitar, it sounds a bit "dinky" - its hard to take the vocals seriously in comparison to the guitar if that makes any sense.

To get a better "pro" sound from the vocals, I'd recommend using a vocal compressor and a hint of delay.

Happy to take another listen at some point, rock on. Please check out some of my stuff if you are so inclined.

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Feb 3, 2010
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