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SUIA-the fall of man

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Author Comments

decided to make a nice hip hop song i really need someone to rap over this PM me if ya want to.



Nice (Y)

Good beat, i like it. :) The piano is tight and i really like the drums! Good job and keep going!

superuberinsaneausm responds:

thanks for the review, i wanna get somebody to rap and sing over it too
(1st verse^^^)

While crunk, this lacks a big lead.

The beat's crunk, but there just aren't enough big hooks in this song. I kept waiting for the mind blowing part, and it just wasn't in there. There was a bad solo at 1:52, but that's WAY too deep in the song for that to pop up. I wanted to hear that about 30 sec in, and longer.

I think you could kick this one up a couple notches before adding lyrics.

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superuberinsaneausm responds:

ive been trying to, my my freind will rap over this someday hopefully someday and ill sing the chorus, your right the song did need a bridge or a breakdown just i had to do this in one sitting and really didnt have enough time to think of something more


Although the title is a bit weird, the song itself is pretty good.

Melody, harmony and all that are good. Drums were OK, although the drum bass gets slightly annoying after a while. You put in enough variation to keep it interesting.

The strings sample you used sounds a bit too computer-generated. Try finding a better sample for them.

All in all, a good 7/10 ; 4/5

superuberinsaneausm responds:

thanks i made the title that way to attract attention


i totally agree with clay ;)
some nice vocals would do great in here!
nice piano , beat and such things!
you're improving dude ;)

superuberinsaneausm responds:



The piano was amazing. Well the song it's very Good. Nice Work :D

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Credits & Info

4.13 / 5.00

Feb 2, 2010
7:12 PM EST
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
4.2 MB
2 min 37 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.