The song itself is good, although it kinda sounds like there is too many sounds playing at once, and it's hard to distinguish what the melody is. It almost hash a harsh sound to it. Some of the levels really need to get adjusted on this one. The kick is hard though, which is what I like about it. :)
I couldnt really hear the blue melody untill near the end when all the instruments took a break from playing. Then the second time through I heard the melody a bit more.
Overall it was a good song, keep it up. :)
And if you got some spare time, could you reviwe my song too? ^.^