A little much but Mega potential
I found it a bit clutterred. Sometime less is morre! You should try to slap a solid simple 4 barr bass behind that firrst awesome melody, grab a lush pad to do chorrds and simply add varriation everry 4:8:16 barrs to each patterrn (make surre they go well togetherr)!! Look-up side-chaining for the drrums and you'll be set! Your drrums were good btw!
Thats all you need ^^
Once you'rre finished a song with these things you can afterr add the effects and extra synths! : )
Thanks for you input ^^. I think you might see better songs tomorrow as I did improve a lot. Hopefully everyone sees that though :( . Thanks again!!
This sounds great!